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Radiant Beauty

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With beauty so radiant
she shines though
Her words capturing
endearing hearts

Emotions colliding with
her design
Fulfilling dreams and desires
with tender reflections

 

My feelings expressed
with her writings
Entering into my soul
as I weep with the knowledge

of her truth

Friendship from the heart
never can be replaced
It is imprinted there forever

 

 

 

Author notes

I wish I could truly express my feelings..but sometimes it is harder than we realize.
You know how I feel...
Nor

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  • stavykm gold member
    June 19
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    Just Beautiful

    I love poems that are written in love for a dear special friend. This is just lovely and in your poem it shows the heart and soul you both share with each other. Beautiful tribute. Thank you for sharing with me.
    Much Love
    Many Blessings
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • a woman to love gold member
    June 4

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    OK how did I miss this piece? This it just lovely Nor. Your feelings are shown through deeply here. Fantastic indeed!

    Love you
    J


  • Cerulean gold member
    June 1
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    Awww it's very nice for her.
  • Sunshine Princess silver member
    May 31

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    This is very nice poem for my Auntie Ashley I love her very much and you did nice job thank you I hope you have a nice day
  • KadafiethaInfamous
    May 22

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    Pure Talent

    Very good poem and very good style. The whole poem points out why you are one of my favorites. You are as soulful as the soul in all of us. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

  • Puppydog silver member
    May 22

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    SO, SO SWEET!!!

    Your deeply touching words will lift up her spirits and put a beautiful light in her heart!'s


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    May 21

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    Well... this is honest and true piece showing the golden side of your heart..a great write inded..well done....


  • AsIThink gold member
    May 21

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    "Friendship from the heart
    never can be replaced
    It is imprinted there forever" Hmmmm...I like these words here. The whole piece is a terrific dedication and touching. I'm sure this had to move her. Thanks for sharing this with us.


  • Never Fall in Love gold member
    May 21

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    Sometimes the silence is enough to explain .. and sometimes the words won't do it justice. I barely know her, but I'm pretty sure she must be amazing! You write so softly, I could cuddle here!


  • crimsondew silver member
    May 20

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    I know how hard it is to express true feelings, it is like you can not write in words the depth of it..Good write nevertheless..May your friendship last forever.


  • Amera gold member
    May 20

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    This is truly a beautiful dedication. I don't agree with your notes, you express yourself very well.

    Love,
    Amera


  • moluv10 gold member
    May 19
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    beautiful expression here. Best of luck in the contest.


  • mysteryLadyMary silver member
    May 19
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    Beautiful write, lovely lady...hugs...


  • Endeavor gold member
    May 18

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    Very Good


    Friendship from the heart
    never can be replaced
    It is imprinted there forever

    Wonderfull carring words for your friend

    Rick


  • BluRosePoet8488
    May 18

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    A very in-depth poem that reaches down deep inside to touch the heart! Well written. You express the heart's emotions with this write. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
    ~Donna~


  • brightsmylesxx
    May 18

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    This is a wonderful poem, so beautifully penned! I see where you're coming from here. This is a very touching!

    God bless,
    ~ Bright Smyles

  • Swangrnv
    May 18

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    I think you...

    expressed your feeling well here. This is a very endearing write! I'm certain the one you wrote this for will be touched.


  • playgames gold member
    May 17

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    such a lovely picture and a poem that share such depth of feelings. you touch the heart and soul of the reader with words that afect the compassion of each one. sweet words that caress the tenderness of ones heart. Very nice.

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