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Believing in Hope

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Wishing wells
    dwell
on hearts desires
absorbing a dream
to demenish a hope.

Love
  courting
         a kiss
to wonder
when you play

 but a second
  is too long
   and a chance
            dissolves.

Dripped in beauty
a candle wax
to close
      letters

Symbolic
of who
and where

  but this road
    never traveled
  remains the mystery.

Where broken
   thoughts
for happiness
   reside
     wishing


that you never wished.

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  • Weltt silver member
    May 18

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    Well looks like that hard work payed off! a well deserved silver cup! I really liked, "Wishing wells dwell on hearts desires" has a beautiful sound to it and is immensely poetic. Thanks for sharing this!


  • KayJay gold member
    May 17
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    Congratulations... well deserving. Beautiful words and imagery...
    Ken
  • wow Very lovely write! It's beautiful, thank you for entering.