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her pristine glory-------------------

Why that steel framed body
resembling a human being
is shedding tears
just after viewing
silken beauty of that butterfly?

Did It sink, in  memoirs
of her  sweet beloved
who after squeezing her pristine glory
gave a slip
and never appeared again on this earth

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Please credit the artist: http://justinblackphotos.deviantart.com/art/Hope-59178009

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 19

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    A butterfly a tearful reminder of what she lost and the one who slipped away. Nicely stated! Thank you for your entry! Marlene
  • What unique imagery that you have here. It's short but it is also to the point. I enjoyed this and wish you luck in the contest.