From the start
you have been my heart
never ever will we part.
In a list
A contest entry
- quick like(Prompt is up)(overnight) by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended May 18, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A little cliche, but it seems to work well. The rhyme is a little forced.
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Good, simple and sweet.
Simon
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short, sweet, and to the point. cute! Good luck in the contest
Kathryn -
A little cliche, but I enjoyed this, because I can relate to these feelings. Nice job and good luck in your contest.
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something I would say to hubby...really nice!
all the best!
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