MY BEST FRIEND YOU ARE PERFECT AND BEATIFUL,ALSO YOU ARE MY BEST FRIEND IN THE WORLD.
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welcome to allpoetry
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Rule one: Don't ever let anyone tell you how to write.
Allow room for CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, everything else is irrelevant.
Beauty can be found in simple statements... a poem can even be found in few words. It's all in how you word it and write it out. Just let the words flow from your heart to your pen, the rest will follow. not everyone is a poet and not everyone should be a critic.
I think this is sweet, it shows your heart... focus on that.
Keep writing on (no matter what others say)!
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hey dont lisson to them i think this poam is fine just fine
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I'm trying to say this as nicely as possible but:
1) If you want to say little messages to your friends, there's always the guestbook at the bottom of their page if their a member here. Its a much better place than as a poem, if this could even be considered as a poem. If they aren't on this site, then send then an email or text message or something.
2) Spellcheck before you upload anything.
3) Leave a space after the comma. Don't have everything all on one line.
4) TURN THE CAPS LOCK OFF. IT IS RUDE TO SHOUT.
Welcome to AP.
Keira
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don't listen to everyones advice. no, i do not preffer this poem, but you shoudl keep trying. don't give up. the advice i give to you is to look at the diffrent styles and put more emotion and details in your work. tell the sad times in you life or what you hate about you loved one. you know, soemthing deep. something many can or can't relate to. just experiment some.
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ok..maybe you should try wrting something else...cause i dont mean to be mean..but this is a terrible poem. its not even a poem....
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InsanePyro666
i understand what you are talking about.You are a nice friend to be exact .
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this sucks.poems are not 4 u
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