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A coffee break with Lady Charisma

smiling arose
  bubbling laughter
sweetening the air
Your blissful suffocation
with such simple exhilaration
her simultaneous  sigh of relief
in  a gracious sip of coffee,

slender and relaxed  expression of fingers
flirting fondly
with the enviable edges of the cup
she peers from it rims

Withholding mischievous giggles
her gaze seeping deep beneath skin,

in waves like sound her light pulses throughout you
divine exasperation!

as you remain breathless cleansed by her presence
her eyes: crystal consuming gold
brilliance of the intense contrasting 
with their Scintillating embrace
she sees from within you and outside of you
she sees you.

in melodic  tones washing over in waves
she submerses you, giving enthralled inspiration
she expresses her  philosophy :
her lips mouthing the shapes of a revolution
but humbly in simplistic serenity
she giggles  in-between breaths and sips of coffee


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inspired by the word Scintillating ( and coffee)
1st draft

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  • unavailable
    September 18
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    I think think this is wonderfully written.


  • Frogzter gold member
    May 19
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    Ah yes, scintillating indeed! I love it! Thanks for entering and best wishes!

    Frogz~
  • This was a delight to read as i sip my am coffee
    Thanks for joining in with this wonderful delight.
    Warm thoughts
    Frozentearz