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A.I. Tears

Binary signals analyzing carbon based forms,
a silicon touch upon fragile life,
contrasting cold logic
of cyber mechanized design   

If life creates the lifeless automaton,
What is the origin of the creators?
are wires and veins accomplishments
of higher intelligence?

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Please credit the artist: http://justinblackphotos.deviantart.com/art/Hope-59178009

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 19

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    Interesting question in the wires and veins; one that you can keep on extending. Very nice entry.
    Thank you!
    Marlene

  • moluv10
    May 19
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    I like this. Great take on the prompt and word useage as well. Best of luck in the contest.


  • catie052 gold member
    May 17

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    this is a really good take on the prompt. i really enjoyed the read. I really loved the powerful questions at the end!

  • phantasyintrigue-x gold member
    May 17

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    Deeply "technologic" (love that song BTW)

    A lot of scientific vocabulary used here, but it works for the uniquity of the poem!!

    "a silicon touch upon fragile life,"
    Definitely my favorite line...

    "If life creates the lifeless automaton,
    What is the origin of the creators?"
    What a question...who knows, who knows?