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I'll be here

I'll always be here to talk to,
To catch you when you fall,
To hug you,
To hold you,
To say everythings gonna be okay.

I told you things would get better,
And see, I was right, They did.
Now trust me when I say this,
I'll always be here.
I'll hold you
While your body shakes out,
What your mind can't handle.

I'll give you advice,
I'll tell you the truth,
I'll hold you tight,
Through those long,
Tear-filled nights.

If you want advice, you got it.
If You want love, you got it.
If you want a helping hand, You got it.
If you want someone to make you laugh, You got it.
If you want a smile, you got it.

I'll be here, waiting.

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  • wow its really good!! keep writing!!

  • Shrouded in Mystery
    June 2, 2008

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    Rhianna I miss you so much. You said you'd always be there. But now you're gone forever. I hope I see you in Heaven. Why did you do it Rhianna? Why? I'll never forget you. Never never never. xxx

  • Shrouded in Mystery
    May 19, 2008
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    aww wow this is so sweet
    xxx

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    May 18, 2008
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    great

    Very nice Rhianna. I may have this wrong but I'd say this is dedicated to Rylan. After reading some of his poems I'd say he needs a friend like you. Anyway whoever this is dedicated to I'm sure will appreciate it very much. Thanks for sharing this. It's deep and very sincere.
    Brian

  • emo001
    May 18, 2008

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    I thought it was great!!!
    i like that line as well
    --"i'll hold you while your body shakes out what your mind can't handle"


  • xxwhatsherfacexx
    May 17, 2008

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    oh this is really sweet.

    i really like the part--"i'll hold you while your body shakes out what your mind can't handle"...it's really great.
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