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Heart of light

When we have the heart of light
We see the future bright
When we have a heart that shines
Darkness within no longer blinds

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  • Lady Mak
    May 18

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    This is a great deep write in a few words.

    To me this means that when we have Jesus the anointed of God in our hearts, the future we see is bright. Our heart then reflects the light of the world, the hope we have through Jesus Christ to be reconciled to God.

    The Darkness from the authority of the air, that operates in the sons of disobedience is removed and we see the glory and the hope from God which has been made manifest through Gods beloved Son the light of the world.

    A beautiful meaningful write, this is what it means to me.


  • Blooming Poet
    May 18

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    This is good. One thing, the rhyme seems a little forced. I understand though with a word limit and all. Great work.

  • Sandra R Reynolds silver member
    May 18
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    Excellent take on the prompt.


  • unsigned gold member
    May 18
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    So very true....


    Blessed be

    Simon