Can you hear my heart,
Screaming your name.
(Your name)
Asking and wondering,
If you feel the same.
(The same)
My eyes follow you,
While you walk out the door.
Counting the steps you take,
Until I see no more.
(No more)
Cant you hear this heart,
Crying out for you.
Cant you see these eyes,
Searching for you.
Dont you hear these words,
Im yelling out to you.
In through one ear,
Hoping it gets through,
To you,
(To you)
To you.
Baby please,
lets give it the chance it deserves.
(baby please)
We wont know until we give it a try.
When I'm alone and cold,
I image you next to me.
Keeping me warm,
While we share a new memory.
(We have so many more to share)
We have somewhere to go,
We have places to be.
We have the future ahead of us,
Who knows what we will see.
Cant you hear this heart,
Crying out for you.
Cant you see these eyes,
Searching for you.
Dont you hear these words,
Im yelling out to you.
In through one ear,
Hoping it gets through,
To you,
(To you)
To you.
Baby please,
lets give it the chance it deserves.
(baby please)
We wont know until we give it a try.
I've found a place to call home,
A place where I feel free.
That place is by your side,
And its always where I'll be.
So don't walk away,
Don't let go of my hand.
(I want to hold it forever)
Stay here with me,
Because by your side is the place I forever will stand.
(I forever will stand)
Author notes
I think I did an okay job...tell me if i did
A contest entry
- Romance.. (guys only) by Angelflower.
1340 points, ended May 27, 2008, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I will write you a song by katie-jo.
450 points, ended June 30, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
new song...do you like?
Comments
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Yes, you did a great job.when are you putting it to music? Congrats on the HM, Ros
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This is pretty good.
Thanks for entering and all the best in the contest.
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This is actually pretty good.. You created a good song here.. I like it.. thanks for sharing..
best of luck!!
Angel
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This poem is really cool, i like the way you have wrote it like a song with the background words i really love this poem its so wonderful, keep up the great writing, your new friend -Amy
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