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True Love

 

 

 

 

He sent her a gift

 

that filled the night sky

 

leaving her lost in love

 

tears fell as she smiled

 

knowing for the first time

 

that he truly loved her

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

10-30 Words
Prompt: Picture

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Comments

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  • Valley Girl gold member
    June 27

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    Aww Beautiful!
    Such a romantic and positive write.
    Your words match perfectly to the picture.
    Very sweet!
    Thanks for sharing. ♥


  • Blooming Poet Greeters member
    May 18

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    I can tell who this is, just by the font. Jeremy to be honest, I have seen better out of you. Not trying to be rude.

  • unsigned gold member
    May 18
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    Really nice Big Man...

    A pleasure to read

    Simon


  • Kathryn Bowden
    May 18
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    really sweet! Good luck!
    Kathryn

  • crimsondew silver member
    May 17
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    Touching...good one..All the best!

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