The heart can only be broken (they say)
With words that remain unspoken (astray)
But I think it can be broken
In just one more way
Cause with bitter disappointment (I know)
It seems to rip you to pieces (although)
It’s Heartbreak, perhaps
But the chasm is narrow
And when it's time to say goodbye
I can only hope I will not cry.
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Heartbreak
A contest entry
- Quickie 10/10/1 by Leila.
300 points, ended May 18, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Aww this is sad. Can relate to it very well. Thanks for entering x
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This is only 8 lines...the requirement is 10 =] x
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But it said 10 because of the blank lines, so I wasn't sure if that counted or not.
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No if someone asks for a line limit, you just count the lines with words on =] There is still time to edit xx
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editeded.
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