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Spell

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Elements of air
giving birth to fire
show my true love
the one I desire

Spirit before me
I ask only this
let her sweet lips
feel my kiss...

Author notes

30 min
10-30 words

Prompt:
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  • Valley Girl silver member
    June 27

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    Wow! I love everything about this poem!
    It really seems like it could be
    a love spell.
    Great emotions, a strong sense of passion.
    This is a fantastic write!

  • SuicidalLover gold member
    May 18

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    Nice...congrats to you on your silver!
    ~Kystal angel


  • Blooming Poet
    May 18

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    Wow. I am amazed. Your rhyming is beautiful, not forced at all. May I say also you obviously got very inspired by the prompt. Love the background also

  • unsigned gold member
    May 18
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    wanted more words....mwahhhhhhh!!!

  • Leila
    May 17
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    Good luck bro =] x
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