A chill down your spine
as you see me pass by.
Goosebumps of absolute fear
and your heart stops.
A four'o'clock image,
gliding by.
As if hovering around.
you can't help but wonder...
Is she real???
A contest entry
- who might you have been in the eighteen hundreds? by Rheea.
2000 points, ended May 25, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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This is a good little write I did not want to dq it because I liked it and wanted people to read it. here comes the "but" =) it had nothing to do with the contest my sweet friend.
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not bad wish this was longer and it would of been great to get more details. I would say this piece needed more of somthing else but i don't know what that would be.
~OG
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oh goose bumps =)
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