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countess of fear

A chill down your spine
as you see me pass by.
Goosebumps of absolute fear
and your heart          stops.

A four'o'clock image,
gliding by.
As if hovering around.
you can't help but wonder...

Is she real???

A contest entry

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  • Rheea gold member
    May 25

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    This is a good little write I did not want to dq it because I liked it and wanted people to read it. here comes the "but" =) it had nothing to do with the contest my sweet friend.

  • not bad wish this was longer and it would of been great to get more details. I would say this piece needed more of somthing else but i don't know what that would be.

    ~OG


  • Rheea gold member
    May 17
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    oh goose bumps =)