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One tree.

Millions of views,
Different colours,
Splashing together,
To form a painting,
Inspired,
By the world,
That we live in,
A masterpeice,

Darkness splashed next to,
The lightest colours of the,
Spectrum,
A dazziling,
Array of the softest pinks,
Next to a bitter yellow,
All given life,
By the world around us,

Thoughts everyday,
Are spun into the art work,
Putting knew persepectives,
On one tree,
Going from dark to light,
Winter to summer,
Reflected not just in the still water,
But in eachother.

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Nature - http://www.deviantart.com/print/485992/
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  • Perception
    May 21, 2008

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    Very well done. Wonderful poem, I liked how you painted the picture. Though "shoved" was awkward.

    Otherwise -- Great poem
    Thanks for entering


  • z etoile
    May 17, 2008
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    Oh its like you painted a painting with your words how absolutley awesome!