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The Spirit's Chosen Path

The first step the spirit takes upon the chosen path,

Begins with that of pain.

A spiritual awakening to higher regions; known only

To the few who dare to tread.

The path it is not easy, as it spirals up and down.

Each step that takes you higher may also bring you to

The ground; for yet another lesson found. 

It is lessons in forgiveness, for others and for self, that Sends your pathway onward to the lofty heights above.

And as we drop these burdens, the Light shines on us bright; melting all our pain and showing us the way.

Climbing ever higher, finding peace and hope and rest.

Guided to a Love we've never known so that we may shine our best.

 

 

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  • Amazira
    August 28
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    Dross!

    The final transmutation, is the leaving of the heaviness of matter to become the true essence of our nature, spirit. That is an ongoing process that transforms our very being.


  • SpiritMother gold member
    August 16

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    Beautiful Thoughts

    Amazing how so much truth can be said in a few words..such an impact you have created in this write.


  • Kyo-N
    June 5

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    I knew what you meant here and it was a nice attempt of a lift... however, I'm not much into spiritual stuff, but it's still a nice way to put it. Maybe I need the devotion itself.
  • Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie

  • LittleMoon silver member
    May 28

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    A short write that says so much. That roller coaster of life's path to finally reach a place that is comfortable to just be oneself and know what is valuable.


  • maa gold member
    May 22

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    indeed ...
    materialistic people seem to always strive for pleasure, rejecting pain and suffering ... forgetting that it is in the midst of suffering that we have the opportunity to find peace ... like going all the way through to the eye of the cyclone ... where we will meet or essential nature which is forever changeless, timeless, motionless ... the only refuge we have ...

    thank you,
    marion

  • quite truthful and very insightful

    live and learn

    so we can grow and shine

    exquisite.

    thank you for entering

    God bless...

  • What a beautiful and inspiring little write.
    It was a joy to read.
    Oh, and good luck in the contest.
    Love and Light.

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