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To
know
a love so
accepting,
is discerning the promise, of this naked truth within yourself,
and remaining willing to trust God, to bring you safely to arrive
amid notions of peace resting secure and pondering contently
the beauty sown of your innocence, finding shelter within its
hope, and moving, to receive the power of Gods'
embrace,
amid
your
own
vulnerability,
and then, becoming
aware of the true brilliance,
of loves certain, simply grand, epiphany. ~
~ Written for You By: ~ James Lee Long ~
Author notes
I hope that this is what you were getting at! It is a complete 75 words...
Many thanks for your patience... I believe I have said what I intended to say... I hope that you enjoyed reading it!
~ James ~
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice ...
and the form is perfect. You only have one problem with this. You forgot the apostrophe in "loves" in the last line: "love's certain".
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I love it, it rocks, gracefully lol and good luck
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beautful and eloquent.
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thank you so much for the entry in the contest and for taking the time to make it into the shape of a plane...
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Incredible imagery
I really enjoy your expansive use of the english language. It appears as though i'll be a learnin' a thing 'er two from ya in the near future. Look forward to it. Chrissy
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Geat write and I love how you laid this out. Works hand in hand with the flow. Best of luck in the contest.
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Interesting write. I liked the form that you did this in, very unique. A little long for my taste, but I did like it, nice job.
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I'm not sure what the sponsor is looking for but I know what you were... very lovingly written and enlightening... All the best in the contest...
Ken
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Nice choice of words. I thought it was a pretty nice little poem. Very simple and content.
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