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Your Eyes

They lift me up when I'm feeling down
They tell a story without a sound
They give me butterflies deep inside
They show feelings you try to hide
They show the pains of your past
And how you don't trust as fast
They light up when you smile
Even though you have walked many miles
When I look in your eyes I see me
That's how I know we're meant to be
So now with God as our witness today
Look into mine, for I have something to say
I promise to be with you good times and bad
Smiling with you and wiping your tears when your sad
Your meant for me and I for you
So with this I say I love you and I do

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  • plainoljoe
    June 4, 2008

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    I like this change that has been coming over you. With God as your witness He will make good things happen--like this poem come to life

    Joe

  • Owl33
    May 18, 2008

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    Very Very Nice poem Mindie! Spoken right from the heart and into the ear of the person who is lucky enough to spend their life with you! I wouldnt change a thing! I have read it three times and I love it! Great work Mindie!


  • Fantasy.Dreamer
    May 17, 2008

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    awwwwww...this is such a cute poem! jeje

    I love it! ♥♥♥♥


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    May 17, 2008

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    Wow this is very beautiful
    and heartfelt Mindie! I love
    how sincere and loving your
    words are here. Lovely wedding
    vows that anyone would love
    to hear. Well done my friend!




    Jeremy0826