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Refurbished


I’ve recently been refurbished
with chips that lead the times
I can feel and touch with sensation
I can whisper words in rhymes

Shinny is my outer shell
much harder than what is known
My abilities are so extreme
only defiance shall be shown

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Credit Photo: http://justinblackphotos.deviant.com/art/Hope-59178009

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 19
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    Liked your "whisper in rhymes" yet only shows defiance. Thank you for your entry! Marlene

  • GreenHrtPaleMoon gold member
    May 17

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    Breathy and beautiful. You captured the emotional elegance of the picture perfectly. Very well written here.