Departed from true passion-
Emotion crash landed
In the darkest deepest holes of her soul
Never to be caressed again-
Until sympathy grew wings
And landed before half shut eyes
Arousing the freedom to cry
And smile- to feel real again
Author notes
pic prompt- http://justinblackphotos.deviantart.com/art/Hope-59178009
A contest entry
- PIF - Picture Prompt #4 by marlene47.
800 points, ended May 20, 9 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like the crash landing of emotion! "Sympathy grew wings" => nice! and bringing out feelings again!
Thank you for your entry!
Marlene
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thank you, and thank you for the hm
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love it.
"emotion crash landed" and "until sympathy grew wings" are most definitely my favorite lines.
really deep poem.GREAT job! -
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thank you
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