In the netherworld of darkness
beneath the earths core
the sorcerers of enchantment
cast incantantions of amour
They allure young virgins
to a realm of erotic bliss
by consuming them with the
fires of an ancient mist
As the pure maidens bathe
by the rivers of tranquility
a fog of mystic wonder
transform them into ladies
of sensuality
In a dimenson of salaciousness
they slither like a viper
Seeking passion from passing
victims with the vengence of
a sniper
Melodies of love charm the
innocent prey into a trance
as fantasies dance in their
heads of fiery romance
The scoundrels of divinations
mock and irrevently jest
as their ungodly potions
draw the poor critters
into the nest
See their evil snickerings
as the virgins descend in shame
in the lustful inhibitions
of which they are not to blame
A contest entry
- Calling all fantasy poets by Idle Mind Wondering.
2500 points, ended June 11, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Speaking as a pure maiden....I loved it ....seduction at its finest.
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Wow. This is excellent. Well done my friend.
~Pamela 
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Wow
wow. i really liked this one. it flows well and it had amazing imagry.
*keep up the good writtingg*
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well done
Flows nicely. Good rhyme and rhythm. The rich vocbulary develops a rich image.
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Nice piece. Really love the title, and the flow is awesome. It's a form of an erotic and sensual poem I've yet to see till now. Great job! Good luck from me in the contest as well Darrel.
. Rewarded 4
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what a title darell i am rather intrested what awakened the vampire to write such a delicious
pieace. good luck in the contest
Lady Jazz
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