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Autisim

Unfeeling blank stares
Lost inside repetition
of a troubled mind

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  • Puppydog gold member
    May 24

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    BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED!!!!

    I feel ones like this are not unfeeling but trapped inside of a mind which is not capable of sharing for reasons we do not understand.


  • Deathless1
    May 21
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    great, my nephew is autistic so this is very true to read.

    hope you win,
    KNIGHT TIME


  • mrs. random silver member
    May 19
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    sad. My cousins have this and its terrible. Good write

    Mylee

  • Fantasy dream
    May 19

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    Ah, sad and true, this haiku is lovely.


  • xxwhatsherfacexx
    May 18

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    this is great. i really like it.
    it brings across what i think people who have autism really deal with on a day to day [or even minute to minute] basis.
    truly inspiring austin!
    :]

  • ian sawicki silver member
    May 18
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    a good poem.

  • writonthebody
    May 17
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    to be honest, I hate haiku's so I think I'm too biased to comment.

  • sheltered
    May 17
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    Excellent

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