Unfeeling blank stares
Lost inside repetition
of a troubled mind
A contest entry
- Haiku PIF Come in, come in, wherever you are! by Periwinkle Blue.
550 points, ended May 19, 2008, 14 entries
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BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED!!!!
I feel ones like this are not unfeeling but trapped inside of a mind which is not capable of sharing for reasons we do not understand.
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great, my nephew is autistic so this is very true to read.
hope you win,
KNIGHT TIME
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sad. My cousins have this and its terrible. Good write
Mylee -
Ah, sad and true, this haiku is lovely.
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this is great. i really like it.
it brings across what i think people who have autism really deal with on a day to day [or even minute to minute] basis.
truly inspiring austin!
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a good poem.
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to be honest, I hate haiku's so I think I'm too biased to comment.
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Excellent
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