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A lump in the ground.

Pictures
will soon fade as
objects and memories...
All I have left is a lump in
the ground.



Author notes

This was hard to write. I never write about my brother or my Dad so sorry it's not good...I didn't want to write much more.

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  • Pollycheck
    May 25, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my short poems contest. It is obviuos that this was writtwen from the heart with much emotion.


  • Eternal-Dreamer
    May 18, 2008

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    this is stunning, it brought all the pain i felt at my grandfathers frunaeral back im now crying this is so emotional wow its amazing


  • ucancallmereal
    May 18, 2008

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    wow........wow....gosh girl this is stunning. i mean i know its short, but it says all it needs to say. just wow.


  • just weak hands
    May 17, 2008

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    i don't think that it's bad! i think that it is simple, but it displays about how you feel about... well, whtvr the situation this deals w/! i really do like it!