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An Abyss So Unyielding

Have you ever been this lonely
And couldn't see the light?
When you can't find what you're headed towards
Don't care enough to try

Have you ever felt so empty
That if you slit your wrists tonight
No one loves enough to care
If you bleed until you die

Have you ever felt like no one sees
The tears that ceaselessly depart?
That scars shown on the outside
Reflect what's in your heart

And since what's on the inside,
Has been so terribly maimed
Life doesn't seem worth fighting for
Existence doesn't seem so great

The abyss you're in tells nothing of
The light some seem to find
Won't tell if it sees something
That can pull you through the night

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  • Lexie
    May 17
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    Wow, you used great description and questions. I liked this poem a lot. It was interesting