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Nothing

Staring blankly into the dark,
Nothing left converges into nothing at all
At least, that's how I try to make it seem
When on the inside, the dark is now a graveyard
And it's the cause of all the broken things
That have been trailing behind, dripping all around me
Until it all crashes down yet again,
Diverges down a dreadful hierarchy into what I can't explain
Then goes from crashing to crushing everything
To form these bloody things I've always written

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  • xeroabyss II
    September 4
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    Such is the plight of the muse, at the exspense of the soul.


  • patsoldcat
    May 20, 2008
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    final edit

    loved this write


  • patsoldcat
    May 20, 2008
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    thanks

  • darkmindedfreak
    May 17, 2008
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    that is nice! i'm trying to pick my favortie part but i love it all!


  • Lexie
    May 17, 2008
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    good job! liked it a lot

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