Barren earth
dried parched
look ahead
as clouds form
between sky and dust
kisses of rain
you thirst no more
Author notes
Prompt: Picture quickie
In a list
A contest entry
- It smells like rain. by Abby Apathy..
300 points, ended May 17, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awe
lol, amazing write, I do not know what to say, impressed with you work, it seems like the more I read, the more i get drawn into your wordk and the way you word them, Good job Lis
frken awesome
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What beautiful imagery...you brought the readers senses alive with you words...I can smell the beauty of the rain...I love the closing lines...strength in brevity for sure...
Best always,
mystic
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...yes...I thirst no more...beautiful write that brings that ozone smell of new rain to the senses (and the heart )...Peace, Rhonda
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attention grabbing, to the heart
pertinent refreshment
resources within cycles so closure is not with last, or first even but the very touchs that parallel that really cared for feeling by "kisses of rain
you thirst no more" as we don't have a fleeting example of love in provisions, respectfully... It reminds me of Isaiah 55, especially verses 10 and 11.
yours is vividly drawing, it's a blast of twenty words that gradually display power of comfort. not absolutely one thing in front of us.
contemplatively welcome,
babies are my subject
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Wow, so expressly good lol
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your use of imagery was very vivid, capturing a picture in my head.
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Thank you...
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Very cool
I am picturing the dawn of creation with your words and this image...They go very well together. Again, you amaze me with how you write such beauty based on a prompt.
Well done, my sweet~
Your Xianaria -
Oh this was beautiful and descriptive I enjoyed this write great job
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This is a very beautiful write.
I like the imagery and the picture is beautiful.
"kisses of rain
you thirst no more"
I wish you luck in the contest,
-poetrydove
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Wonderful work here!
Great job capturing this picture
with your words. Keep it up and
thanks a lot for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826 -
Very pretty ~
You have a talent of Imagery...nice to meet you ~
Good luck and God bless,
Bear ~
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Wow ... your poem is like peering into this image. Very well writ with imagery and splendor.
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A lovely image for the image.
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it has a great rhythm and good imagery.
best of luck.
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