Memories of void times
Where I lie in your mind's eye
And whisper sweet goodbyes
While you cry & cry
Dance with me, Darling
I'll show you how much I care
Watching you dwindle now
As I rip up your life
Can you still hear me
Over the screaming in these rooms
Filling you up & hiding you away
Sharpening your silly lies
Shatter me
Cut me up
With your bits of glass
And lock me out
Hello, my Darling
I'm still here
I still want you
Escape these walls, I dare you
I'm here again
Is this your final stand
With a bullet hole
Stuffed into your head?
The people are crying
As they lower you into the ground
You in the coffin
With a lie lodged in your head
Author notes
Well.
Enjoy the insanity.
Of the insane.
=]
Well....suppose you can give me something to work with?
Comments
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really really really good
I absolutly loved everything about it. The ending was my favorite. I dont think you sounded apethetic...more indifferent. Like you were saying hey your filthy liar your dead, why the heck is everyone crying? anyways i love everything about this poem..keep writeing i can wait to read more.
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Jaded Teardrop
This was really an amazing poem. My favorite part was when you said "with a bullet hole stuffed in to your head." The end was kind of awkward tho. It made you sound sorry for what you had done. Maybe you should try and make it like you really hate this person and they got what they deserved. It was really good any way...
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