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Shores of Forbidden Treachery

Devine Goddess of ravenous beauty
Gentle seams entwining in endless harmony
Cascading dainty sparkles of light exploding in emotion
Brilliance listlessly twirling, emerald eyes softly gazing

Eternal peace swaying soundlessly, heat flowing passionately
Embrace caught as a horrifying creature furiously screams
Shattering scarring souls of bottomless enchantment,
Delicate drops of blood swirling in a powerful mist

Wings of gorgeous shadows soliciting painful memories
Lovely midnight stars twinkling joyfully above
Overflowing silky flesh flooding amazing perfection
Trapped in flashes of distance and time, brought to extinction.

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  • ShelleyA gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    A good write and interpretation of the picture prompt. Good imagery, flow and tone. Vivid descriptives. Nice depth of feeling. Good word choice, alliteration and assonance. Thank you for your entry.