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These handcuffs simply do not bind me

Look closely

Flowers you'll see

Entwined and bounded
Before Thee


Nectar so sweet and plentiful

Naked, Unspoiled

Pleasure awaits me

Entwined and Bounded
Forever Free

A contest entry

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  • Ithica silver member
    June 2, 2008

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    Yes the cuffs should be more of an illusive restraint that truly restrictive... NIcely said... Thank-you for entering! cia


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    May 17, 2008
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    excellent~

    Entwined and beautiful before thee
    Nectar so sweet and plentiful....
    Love the poem and the imagery
    Best of luck in the contest...
    Did you have a name change before this?
    Let me know
    Hugs
    Susan~~~
    Ummm I have up 3 new ones drop by when ya can
    Again best of luck in the contest......