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Polyacrostic Palimpsest - Care is Our Dream

 Kindly refer to Notes on Polyacrostic Palimpsests 

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Palimpsest : A manuscript on which more than one text is written with earlier writing, or one level of meaning, partially visible.

For further examples see the link to Polyacrostic list below. 

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The text appears twice here :

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I : plain text - in black
II: Complete acrostic palimpsests .

Care is our dream Care : a core value 


Text II is formatted to show letter progression hidden in Text I. Punctuation, spacing, are absent, highlighting  

palimpsest phrases invisible in the first version for the sake of clarity ... Enjoy !

 

 

Care is Our Dream

 

 

                                I 

Care, a core value, can't be traded, each

At risk may put heart if mistrust dare feed.

Rare welcome marry, ease bring, carry, speed, 

Eve, night, day, select ideals free, teach,

Ideas shared as light shines fair. Impeach

Snow frost, ice, or snap cold, back zest's strong seed !

Order true open joys, shrug doubts off, lead 

Urge on through summer's sorrow stumped, find speech,

Reveal tender thread to wed bliss reach.

Dreams venerated never veer from deed,

Real harmonies trump pains, deny greed's rede,

Equal friends are full of hope and each

As muse whose human quality warms air, 

Meets time as team well matched, as magic pair.

 

 

 

                       II 

 

 

 

Care is our dream Care : a core value

                                                   

  

Careacorevaluecantbetradedeach

Atriskmayputheartifmistrustdarefeed

Rarewelcomemarryeasebringcarryspeed

Evenightdayselectidealsfreeteach

Ideassharedaslightshinesfairimpeach

Snowfrosticeorsnapcoldbackzestsstrongseed

Ordertrueopenjoysshrugdoubtsofflead

Urgeonthroughsummersorrowsstumpedfindspeech

Revealtenderthreadtowedblissreach

Dreamsveneratedneverveerfromdeed

Realharmoniestrumppainsdenygreedsrede

Equalfriendsarefullofhopeandeach

Asmusewhosehumanqualitywarmsair

Meetstimeasteamwellmatchedasmagicpair

 

                                                     

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  • ssorbet1
    August 12

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    very good

    I really liked they way you designed part II. Ive never seen anythig quite like it before. I like the colors and the roses. I also liked the way you seemed to compare it too marriage. Caring is in fact like a marriage. However, too often people associate negative connations with the word marriage. Im glad to see some words like marriage, team, and friends in the reference to caring. I also thought that you used some very interesting word choice and found it especially colorful and vivid like the verse "Reveal tender thread to wed bliss reach". very upbeat, positive. good luck!

  • Star Shine gold member
    May 19

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    Oh my what expertise. And the use of the words, and their placement, beyond fitting the requirements of the style, are so vividly chosen. the meter is lovely, tugs the heartstrings of one who likes classic rhyme. Thanks for this entry and the lesson.


  • Night Hope gold member
    May 17

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    "Equal friends are full of hope and each
    As muse whose human quality warms air,
    Meets time as team well matched, as magic pair."

    So that's where this heatwave came from...the east. Gorgeous, Scribe. 'Tis more than merely your incredible talent & huge heart that made you my dear Friend so many moons ago, you know. Wanda