You said you loved me but she said you don’t,
She said she was all ways down for me but they said she wont,
So as I listen to these voices in my head,
Thinking about everything that you said,
I listened,
Wishing that it was all true,
Wishing that she will never hurt me like you do,
She’s my friend and so is you,
But you say false and she say true,
So who am I suppose to believe,
The one who talked behind my back or the one
who stabbed me in the back and left me there to bleed,
Watching me screaming and reaching out for your hand,
You walk away and she comes and reach for me helping me to stand,
She talks behind my back,
But only because of the fact,
Of what you did to me she doesn’t want to tell me,
But I already know,
You smile in front of my face as if I am that slow,
To believe of what I already know,
Is true,
Now what shall I do,
Should I pick her or you,
A friendship that was once so true,
Not Realizing that she was really you.
You tricked me,
You told me you was always gone be down,
Then you kicked me,
As I’m seating here looking at our picture I whisper,
How can my friend be my own enemy’ I thought you were my sister,
A contest entry
- !GOSSIP! by ForeverLastingComa.
450 points, ended May 18, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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i wrote this a year ago but its right for this topic..hope u like..
Comments
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that was really good...im really glad i dont have tha kind of relationship with my sister...but at times i do feel like they are stabbing me in the back, but im so sorry you and your sister have that kind of relationship...but overall tha was a good write...
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wow, that is really deep. sometimes i feel the sawe way. My only critique is that you should re read this piece and correct it because a lot of the things you said didn't make any sence in grammer..just re vise that. i did understand everything that you wrote though. my favorite lines of this poem were,
"So who am I suppose to believe,
The one who talked behind my back or the one
who stabbed me in the back and left me there to bleed,
Watching me screaming and reaching out for your hand,
You walk away and she comes and reach for me helping me to stand,
She talks behind my back,
But only because of the fact,
Of what you did to me she doesn’t want to tell me,
But I already know,"
Overall amazing poem
thank you for entering and good luck
~*ForeverLastingComa aka Leesha*~
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