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i wonder

so close
but yet so far
every day
i wonder where you are

who you're with
what you do
and i hope and pray
that you think of me too

you are so dear
like the sweetest song
i cant help but wonder
how long?

how long till i touch your skin
till i see your face
and feel the warmth
of your embrace

i want to touch your lips
smell your hair
taste your blood
life is so unfair!!!!!

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  • DeSiBoO14
    May 31, 2008

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    lIfE iS sO uNfAiR!!...i WoNdEr If Da DuDe Im ThInKiN oF iS tHiNkIn BoUt Me??..PrObLy Not.. AnY wAyS It WaS kUtE!!i LyKd It!!...


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    May 17, 2008
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    aww this is soo sweet,
    thank you sweetie, thank you so much,
    you are a beauiful poet my dear


  • Lexie
    May 17, 2008

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    So sweet. But I have to ask about the tasting blood part. Other then that, it was wonderful. It had a great flow to it.