Thoughts swirling,
Mind churning,
Fists balling,
Anger calling,
Throat clenching,
Heart wrenching,
Eyes fill,
Tears spill,
Emotions ache,
Heart break.
A contest entry
- cry me a river by patsoldcat.
600 points, ended May 20, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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final edit
good meter and rhyme.
liked this write.
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Thanks pat
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thanks
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short and sweet, well without the sweet, but it is actually creative with so few words. not bad at all
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