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natural proof

the hazy sky
makes my rivers run
the lavender mountains
proves jesus is god's son
the amber star above our heads
shows your ambition for the very end
put all of this togegther in the mixes
you'll see that life is the reason of our blend

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creation's example

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  • Quiet places
    May 17, 2008
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    Excellent

    Love the message in this poem! Great job of drawing in the reader. Don