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Warped

Stomach's contents
dislodged

writhing body

stricken

down
with sickness






drops




Author notes

10 words

A contest entry

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  • michaelynn
    May 20, 2008
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    i feel ya


  • Ithica silver member
    May 17, 2008

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    Yikes! To think I just went through this experience a few days ago... Not a pleasant memory, especially since you have described it so vividly... Thank-you for entering!


  • jcat gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    Not so wonderful imagery here.... I hate being sick!! But you did a great job bringing life to 10 words!! Best of luck