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A Lying Remembrance

If you've truly loved,

then all will be missed

You will find yourself aching for every flaw

As if it could save you from the fright

Every memory bathed in yellow light

That was how it felt, right?

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  • eclairluv
    May 18, 2008

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    Wow!! Powerful to me!! You need to enter this into a contest so you might want to find one that would apply. Keep writing, I will be looking on your sight to hopefully find new things