Grandad's sis,
Aunty Karen.
Started a fight,
With my sister Sharon.
She called me Michael
When my name is Chris
This little blunder, went asunder
For Michael's dating Sis.
A few corrections thrown about
And denials all abound
And then I felt Sharon look
Me totally up and down
"Scarily, you look like Mike"
She commented casually
"I could do worse"
I said to her, passingly
We stopped and looked at each other
In awkward silence at what we said
Neither would admit it, but
Twisted thoughts now crossed our heads.
We both thought simultaneously
"What if" siblings we were not
"What if" and worse the answer was
"Not bad" and best forgot
Sis was first to make a move
And leaned forward without miss
Whispered gently in my ear
"You wish" with a quick kiss
My brain on rapid fire flew
And grabbed her at the hip
In a moment I returned the kiss
And in my tongue I slipped
Breaking free, I felt a glee
An argument I won
I outdid my sis, my incest twist
Society would shun
I whispered back "I'm good in the sack"
To watch her face turn red
But sis, the bitch, was better yet
simply said "I give great head"
Her hand it dropped unto my crutch
"Typical", she spoke,
"You sicko your liking this"
As she gave a tiny stroke.
Not to be outdone in this game begun
A breast I did now clutch
And though I fondled erected nipples
Still my sister held my crutch
This sinful war, my sister whore
was winning and soon'd be done
For I knew in just seconds few
I probably would...
Hastily I pushed her free
backward she tumbled on her feet
A wry sick smile upon her dial
My defeat, my retreat,
from her petite hand upon my...
This game of words and actions
was getting out of hand
Perhaps by chance, perhaps luck
Mike returned and took her hand.
As she left the room she eyed me again
In a flirtatious type of way
I'm not sure what makes me angrier,
That I lost the argument, or the lay.
Author notes
This is defiantly a tongue in cheek little poem, as I'm sure you'll realise. It's an idea I've had for a while... where does sibling rivalry end with personal pride? Some siblings will do anything to 'one up' on the other. Here I made the 'one upping' incestuous acts...
And people say I'm twisted in the head
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Hmmmm. well thats different. Not quite sure what to say. I have a sister and it sure as hell ain't like that!
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Superb
A little disturbing in places but very well written. I don't have a brother so no Freudian crap in my home but I guess it's out there hiding in the closet. Excellent treatment of a difficult theme. -
Ok number one.. I've never read anything that is this long begore..lol. So the fact that I'm actually commenting and that I read the whole thing amaze's me lol.. But I like this.. I like the image and how strong it is.. You did a good job.. Thanks for sharing!!
Angel
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Actually whilst this is long, I've got another 2 or 3 that are longer still. I've even got one that I separated into chapters
Thank you for your patience in reading it though. Hope you got a laugh.
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Clever and naughty. I loved it. I think I'll share it with my sister and see what she thinks!!! Very fun to read. Love anything that flirts with taboo and challenges norms. Great job!
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Too wordy
Love the subject choice and where you take it! Well done. Stretch me, why don't you? Have you thought.... "My father's auntie started a fight...." Keep it tight, fewer words. Poets aren't paid by the word. Bloody marvelous otherwise. -
An interesting write, for sure... a fresh concept and excellent writing that had me reading through to the end
thank you for sharing, and best wishes... and you are definately not twisted... just a great writer
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very interesting. I liked it
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I love the dialogue here and the approachability of the piece. I could relate to pretty much every line. Well done on a great write!
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"I could relate to pretty much every line"
I am hoping not literally!
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HA no I see what you mean - but yeah I could really see this and, well, I just loved it - it made me giggle
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Tongue in what?? ^*^
A very wittie piece, and the rivalry seems to go on and on especially with twins. A really good read. I liked it very much. AND I see no room for improvement.
Cheryl
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