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Yearning For You

 

 

 

Heartache runs throughout me

like an ocean it fills my veins

leaving me lost in memories of you

tears fall hard onto the marble tiles

 

As you stand before me

I reach out to touch you once more 

my soul cries out as I fall

nothing but cold air and sadness

 

Another ghost of you

leaves me yearning in tears

as I reach the end of my sanity

I collapse in thoughts of you

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: Lost Love

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  • patsoldcat
    May 20, 2008
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    final edit

    marvelous write,
    liked the meter and imagry

  • patsoldcat
    May 20, 2008
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    thanks


  • jcat gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    So much sadness my friend!!! You have done a wonderful job desrcibing lost love and bringing those emotions to the forefront of the reader's mind!! Well done and best of luck...