Free falling
through your eyes
hoping to find you
again
Author notes
10 Words
A contest entry
- Ten Little Words... by Ithica.
525 points, ended May 17, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
A sad write
but there is still hope
in the end.
Fantastic poem!
I always like it when people
are still trying
to win in the end.
Congrats on the HM!
♥
-
I liked this and the sense of helplessness and hope.
Marlene -
Yes I can identify with this... Basically "lights are on... and nobody's home...] Although you captured it much more beautifully than that... Thank-you for entering!
-
Aww, such a beautiful write in only 10 words. Wow! This is so sad, but still full of hope. Beautiful! Best of luck in the contest.
-
Beautiful choice of 10 words and I am sure that many will relate. I wish you the best of luck here
-
I love your imagery - just stunningly done
Just beautiful....
Great poem - in only ten words... wow!
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
