A paradise getaway
of indigo dreams
with jagged cliffs glimmering
a kiss from the sun
stroll along soft, white sand,
or venture into the bush-walking trails,
you will find yourself surrounded
by towering gum trees;
a fernery that will mesmerize
into sighs
with balmy, salty air
lifting the waves
for a perfect escape
close your eyes~
feel the tranquility
nourishing your soul
as this secluded shoreline
of spectacular splendor,
will cradle your worries
with every breath taken~
Author notes
Stage 1 Destination - Australia:
www.southcoast.net.au/eurobodalla/default.htm
Eurobodalla
The Eurobodalla, with its stunning coastline of sparkling beaches, craggy
headlands and serene rivers, is set against a backdrop of untamed wilderness.
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A contest entry
- Tour De Monde - Stage 1 by Errant Panther.
300 points, ended June 5, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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OMG
I am such a sillybean, Sorry for not replying sooner
Thank you so very much for the lovely award and advancement into the next round
Shall be posting a poem asap!
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Jazzy
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Congratulations on your award and welcome to the next round.
Blessings.
Frozentearz -
This is beautiful and the flow was working too, but when I read the second stanza it threw me off. Twisting some words around might help or let it be. Sorry, I'm a word flow nazi.
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well .. I am sorry to hear my words through off your flow, I found it to be quite flowing but then again I guess it is how someone interprets and reads along with the words.. I appreciate your kind comment and look forward to reading your entry..
gave me a chuckle with the word nazi comment
Thanks
Jasminerose
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I'm there!! Whooo...this is the life for me!!!
Lovely-don't pinch me, i might wake up!
xxx Hilly xxx
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thank you Hilly for the very lovely comment and for making me tonight
I promise I won't pinch you if you don't pinch me either!!
Linda
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Wonderful beautiful imagery brought to us through your words, well done and thanks for joining in,
Warm thoughts.
frozentearz -
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Thank you frozentearz for the wonderful compliment on my entry!!
I am so glad you enjoyed it so
Linda
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What a breathtaking place you describe so vividly!
Makes me want to visit soon and soak in the splendor! Let's go!
Beautifully written once again, Sis
Lynda
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Thank you Sis for the beautiful compliments on my entry Let's go soon
Jazzy
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fernery that will mesmerize
into sighs
fantastic imagery..makes me want to visit..like NOW..hehe..thanx so much for sharing..blessings..namaste..
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What a gorgeous and inspiring piece
you have written here! The imagery
and emotions are great. It's a
wonderful feeling to be able to find
yourself in such a place everyday.
Something that I think so many of us
long for in our busy lives.
Lovely work here my friend and all
the best to you in this contest!
Thanks a lot for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826
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