leavin someone behind,
someone that is loved,
someone who will never be forgotten,
someone who has left a finger print,
someone who had changed your life,
someone who has changed it for the good,
even when the someone crushed you with words,
its hard to get bak up,
but knowing what you have learnt,
and getting back up,
knowing what to do,
knowing what not to do...
A contest entry
- cry me a river by patsoldcat.
600 points, ended May 20, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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fairly well written. I like the raw emotion here- it's real and painful. well done.
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final edit
nice and positive for loosing someone.
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thanks
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learning from what happened and tying to change for the better
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