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Fading Love

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Our Love is fading away
in Father Time's kind embrace!

A contest entry

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  • jackreed3 gold member
    May 27, 2008
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    This is very nicely done.. Thank You for your nice
    comments that I have receive.. from you..


    • darlintlc silver member
      May 27, 2008
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      Thanks for commenting on "Fading Love" it was a short poem for a contest with just a few words...I think 15!

      It's my pleasure to read your poems!
      your friend
      darlintlc


  • tawk gold member
    May 18, 2008

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    Wow so much in so little! Such wonderful emotion and imagery. Father Time is always ticking we need to treasure each moment. Thanks for sharing Theresa


    • darlintlc silver member
      May 18, 2008
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      Thanks for the comment on "Fading Love" Ten word contest can be interesting!
      darlintlc


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 18, 2008

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    Old Father Time never waits for any man...or woman. This piece has only two lines but is very very understandable. Deep and thought-provoking too. Keep writing. I like this one a lot.

    Dark Love
    Wayne Leon
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    • darlintlc silver member
      May 18, 2008
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      Thanks on your comment for "Fading Love"
      Love is not one of my best subjects! ha!
      I said Father Time was kind in this piece cause he takes away the pain of love that is no more.

      Your friend
      darlintlc


  • Ithica silver member
    May 17, 2008

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    Hmmm... He isn't sounding too kind to me... In fact the Father Time "I" know is downright onerous!!! Thank-you for entering!

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