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Deadly Kiss

I lay here asleep
My breathing soft and deep
a cool brezze fills the room
as i await my doom
he enter through the window
his warm breath on my neck
his fangs come closer with each step
mouth open i feel one second of pain
and im relaxed again
and i still love him

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    May 17, 2008
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    Wow, interesting piece you
    have written here. Well done
    and thanks a lot for sharing
    it here!




    Jeremy0826