terrified of whats inside
this love that burns inside me
i know that they'll hate it if they realize
i never want to let you go
cause babe i'm not alright when you leave
i want you with me
i'd take it all back if i could
they say we shouldn't be together
that were all wrong for each other
you have to let me know I'm dieing inside you know
we'll they broke are hearts quite literally
i need you do you need me
if all we had was something to make it better
faster cause I'm falling in love
we'll make it last forever
there Passions is wearing thin
lets make it last forever
and you made your self a bet at the bottom of the blackest hole
so why cant they listen just long enough for us to explain
A contest entry
- forbidden love by hardwire.
450 points, ended May 17, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
does it suck? (tell the truth)
Comments
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no it doesnt suck!!! i really liked it. its one of those poems that everyone can relate to. especially me:/ but i love it
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thank you i'm glad you could relate this is the first poem i've written in a while so i was worried.
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amazing .. i am going through that exactly right now
i just broke up with my bf and then i begged for him
back and i told him never again we will last forever..
so yeah the other people did break our hearts and i am
in love ... that was amazing =]
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thanks i'm glad you could relate i wrote this for the person i go out with. some of my friends dont like them and i can't let my parents find out
either.but i love them so too bad for them.
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