Fantasy castle
dreams
asleep
upon cobblestones--
blushing
deeply
tiers
f
a
l
l
Author notes
Prompt:
10 words
I haven't been in such a good mood lately - most of writes have been dark and such...
Sorry not so good...
Need to change the title...
A bit abstract imagery there ~ if not understood, just hallah!
In a list
A contest entry
- Ten Little Words... by Ithica.
525 points, ended May 17, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be honest here.
Comments
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Okay, a dream - tiers falling onto cobblestones. Want to get in touch with the earth? Earthy, therefore blushing? See that, I got drawn right in.
Marlene
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Dreams of falling are a common theme... I had books on this and they are significant in several ways... [I won't go into it here...
but you will always wake up before you hit bottom.... "shivers"] You have done an excellent job conveying this idea... Thank-you for entering! psst! dreamt/dreampt
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I didn't count ten words... So I will come back!!! -
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Sorry! I will be finishing soon!
I was doing homework
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