Without you
enduring heart ache
Craving your touch
Empty sheets
Author notes
10 words
A contest entry
- Ten Little Words... by Ithica.
525 points, ended May 17, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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So sad to miss a loved one... Poignantly written... Thank-you for entering!
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Wow
I never knew 10 words could describe so much...and make me feel it just as if i was you...amazing
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10 words, these are ten AMAZING words. you created the heart ache in such simplicity it burns. i love this write! best of luck!
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aww
sad! good job on this.
christina
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So sad but a great thought
for this contest. Good luck
to you with it here!
Jeremy0826 -
ooo... I like the feel you create here, with the "empty sheets" wonderful job on this entry... In just ten words you've created wonderful emotion.
Great poem
And best of luck in your contest
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