Relationship
rust
magnets discover...
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dulls the attraction
between
one another
A contest entry
- Ten Little Words... by Ithica.
525 points, ended May 17, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice work Rudlof!
Good to write to you again! I liked what I read here! This was a great one to review and read! THANKS RUDOLF!!
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Very nice.... much deeper than the space it takes up...someone said that to me once- i wont take the credit
But it is very fitting here!! Beautiful write! 
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Profound and Powerful!!!
Great job!!!
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Hi Rudy
Misswd youz at the Blue Moon Reading - Joe
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Rudolf...You have become addicted to these little word counted contest havent you? lol (I know! me too!)
You did a fantastic job here...I can not believe how well you can pull these restrictive writes off so well....and then keep your rhyme too...GREAT JOB!
Jamie
(I know I need to stop with this pirate emoticon...I need something more grown up like a rose or something, lol)
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Exellent!
Few words have said so much! ***Pam***
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Stuck like glue and suddenly the polarities reverse... You can't "push" those suckers together... There is a sad truth to this!!! Thank-you for entering!
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A great ten words...I think it's summed up in one word...familiarity.
All the best in the contest...Sue
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