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Beautiful Hands

Hands reaching out to share...
Hands lifted up in prayer,
Healing hands of doctor or nurse
Giving their tender loving care.

Hands skillfully used to play the drums,
A melody on the flute or violin,
Hands applauding a performance well done,
An orchestral work played,
A song beautifully sung!

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Word 'PASSION' Name: Harriet

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  • Symphony
    October 16, 2008

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    Ohhh, this is such a beautiful topic to write on, I love the fact that you said in response to a comment that it was supposed to be based on "reaching out to people" - that's just fantastic alone, but the way in which you structured it, mentioning the different ways that hands could be used was wonderful.

    I like too, that you didn't overdo it by making it too long and rambling! Honestly, the length of this was just perfect! And naturally the fact that it mentioned musicians pleased me! Thanks for entering it


  • owlish
    August 25, 2008

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    Please put which word you used and your screen name in the AN. Otherwise, nice rhyme. It's a cute, sweet poem, very full of love and joy. Thank you for your entry, and best wishes!

    • harriet567
      August 25, 2008
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      Thank you

      I'm pleased you liked it - not sure if it fits the category but it's about different ways of reaching out to other people.

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in our contest, Josie & Kiarna