From the humdrum existence
of concrete mazes inspired
a radically magnificent dream
of silent conifers lying in wait
banking on mothers embrace
and earth a narcissist clambers to view
upon the liquid mirror of nature stretched
glistening with peaceful serenity
its image a halo of golden crown
and snowy necklace guilelessly mounted
the rippling stillness calmly reflects
upon the world of surrealness obscured
with every puff of breath a noiseless song
a clear note in ethereal streams seems
an ode to elegance in short raw bursts.
Author notes
Picture prompt
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired contest 7!! by Quiet places.
600 points, ended May 19, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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What beautiful images you have portrayed with this write! Very soothing and peaceful.
"upon the liquid mirror of nature stretched
glistening with peaceful serenity
its image a halo of golden crown
and snowy necklace guilelessly mounted"
Lovely!
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Excellent
A wonderful display of the majestic painting that adorns our eyes. Great job of drawing in your reader. Don
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Thank you!
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