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Circles Forever

Love melting in a pot of blemishes
Slowly succumbing to the inevitable

Where floating castles and palisades
Crumble, and fade to the memories

Of yesterdays torn and taken by lies
Stained smiles and empty hearts

Our garden in which we planted and grew
Now an untamed jungle for the lost

So i stumble and fall never seeing the light
In circles forever, in circles forever

Of a love once found
To never taste again












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Artwork .. Rose by Morrissey666 collected from deviantart

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 6

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    Sigh.. I know this feeling all too well! This is incredibly beautiful and also so sad..

    I go in those circles a lot..



  • Sailor Ptolema gold member
    May 30

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    I really enjoyed reading this, there is such bitter pain and sadness, to use your words, "melting" out of this poem! well written, as usual!
  • individuality gold member
    May 22

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    a gemini - hehehe so to am i. - ah a dark piece here with never seeing the light, i have not looked at the artwork so i am going just by your words.


  • CinfullyDelicious
    May 17

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    Wow darl really deep, quite profound words
    alovely take on the picture

    Now a untamed jungle..should be Now an untamed jungle ..jus to help

    Thank you so much for this wonderful write, showing me exactly why I admire your skill and why your a favourite



    Goodluck


    Cin

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